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The humor makes it worse

Review from Transformation →

Don’t get me wrong, I love dungeon crawler Carl and its narrators, but I feel that the comedy and humor here takes away from the actual story. If it was more serious like Primal Hunter or Defiance of the Fall then maybe it would’ve worked.

Solid book

Review from Dungeon Lord →

Jeff hays is great as always and the story is captivating. There is one “smut” section but you can skip to the next chapter if it bothers you.