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no story structure. tongue in cheek. zero tension. more like an idea needng more work

Would you listen to Delvers LLC: Adventure Capital again? Why? No. Very limited and narrow character growth. The story is very split and often times I question as to how certain scenes are particularly necessary for the overall plot or character growth. Rather than progressing the story it was dragged out. What was the most..

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Good try Neven Iliev. But I’m close to asking for my credit back. If it were more smutty I would be ok with it. If it were more funny I would be ok with it. But this is a poorly written RPG lit book that acts like it’s gonna be funny or raunch, but falls..

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I was surprised by how quickly this book turns naughty and was a little worried (and not at all hopeful). That the book might force a lot of such situations. Honestly I don’t feel it over did it at all. This book was good fun and changes things up. I intentionally wanted something like this..

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I found the premise of the story unique. I enjoyed the fun and games of the plot. While the book never quite had all the beats of a typical adventure plot it was still a fun page turner with every character being enjoyable and well acted by the voice performer. It just worked despite breaking..

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I never wright reviews but this book was so good every word is a hook

laugh out loud funny!!!! I can’t wait for volume two. This is a surprisingly funny and interesting book.

this book shares a lot of thinks with other in the same RPGlit field, and i really enjoyed it but all of the reading of character sheets and stats got very old after the 3rd chapter and by the end of the book i wanted to kill myself.

narrator was great all sound is easy not annoy at all.cant wait for book 2

Slow buildup but I like what this will become I look forward to more books