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It’s funny! And the story is good, his good nature some times gets a bit annoying but other then that it’s good

I hadn’t listened to an audio book for 2 years. My brother had tried to get me to listen to this series for months. I didn’t have a interest in it really….until I were trapped in a car with him and he played the first hour of the first book. I then listened to the..

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MC doesn’t develop much maturity, pretty whiny. Good world and progression. Decent ground work for future books. Worth the credit.

Thoroughly enjoyed the story. The author managed to create such an interesting premise with the way mana shaping fits with firearms. Throw in the fact that it’s the sound booth crew doing the narration and this is a 10/10 and I can’t wait for more in the series.

Just fun all around. The narrator and music took this fun story to the next level.

Incredible, what more can I say? I bet old Dan is strong and tough and cool, but I’m positive Donut and Karl are.

Chester in the bathroom made me pause the story cause I was laughing too hard to hear 🤣. 10/10 will listen to again

excellent intro to lit rpgs, fantastic audio, cannot wait for the next book, hopefully done by the same company.

I am LOVING this series! Love the style, love the performances. This book is written in a way that I haven’t ever experienced. But it works SO well. I’ll be continuing on with the series!

I found the story enjoyable overall, but the extensive battle scenes could benefit from some editing. If the author trimmed some excess detail, it would enhance the pacing and overall impact. A little tightening up could make a significant improvement.