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Big build up for?

Review from Hell’s Rejects, Books 1-4 →

I am two hours in and still gathering the rejects together. Maybe I am just used to quicker beginnings but this seems to be taking a long time and is unnecessary. Could sum up the female characters story in five lines or in flashback. Not a bad story or narration but just not moving quick..

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