I really enjoyed this book there were a few things that I found a little distracting. Usually it’s word choice, where a character that has no knowledge of our world will use the term such as gunmetal gray hair. When the main character uses terminology such as that it is fully understood since he is..
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While the story give more backround into the evens of the worlds past. It takes way to long to get to the important bits.
The personalities of the charecters is amazing, they all seem extremely well thought out. I think this 3rd book got alittle bit muddled with all the plots going on at once, but that is my only complaint. Aurtorian is rad, and it really makes me want to listen to the whole DD series again. there..
A decent story but it was consistently ruined by overly cutsie narration. Way to much forced comedy that left me cringing. Story seemed overly rushed. Too many time jumps.
The book is extremely slow starting and when the story (after 3 books) finally starts up, the author ends the book. I give it 3/5 of five stars because he literally only just started the story and then ended it. M Should do less slice of life and more focus on the story, overall you..
Everything overall was amazing my only complaint was with the narrating the narrating in this particular book makes it a little confusing to follow Follow at times
I liked the story and the world but I think the author did too much tell instead of showing especially when it came to the characters. Prose is very vanilla. I liked it.
This is one of the better cultivation novels I have read, I picked this series up because of the narrator, he is fantastic but I enjoyed this story very much.
I enjoyed this book more than the last several. I was a bit disappointed in the ending as it clearly needs a sequel. Only now did I find out that another book in the series will be forthcoming. After the improvements in this book, I will definitely purchase the next book.
the last part was complete carp it just started to lose the flow and focused everthing down your pie hole …. to making tess robot to walk to the where to be she need to be at the end to the whitefall brother showed up out of no where just for cliffhanger, there is more..