“Here is what we’ll do when it look like we are about to crash ill turn off my phone. until then can you please tell that lady back there to put that screaming kid in the over head compartment or invest in some duct tape.”
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This was exactly what I was needing after the second book left me a bit wanting.
Author never uses while or among, instead opting for whilst or amongst, even for supposed modern day characters.
Nice
Review from The Second Betrayal →
Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice Nice. Nice. Third book is out. Nice. Fantastic.
The story is good. There are just a few issues that im having trouble getting used to. I want him to hurry up and find something that really makes him unique. Maybe not OP but at least really unique. This doesn’t have that. He doesn’t seem too curious… or HUNGRY for it. He’s just not…
Rising Action
Review from A Thousand Li: The First Stop →
It is a fine addition to the first book, though it felt like the author could have added some parts and that it didn’t have much of a climax, just a lot of rising action. I feel like some additional lines added could help ground the story more, making it feel more like the story..
Oh my!
Review from Sacred Cat Island →
Harmon really knocked this story outta the park. I loved it and hated for it to end but now I’m excited for more in the future. I can’t wait to see how it all unfolds!
I thoroughly enjoy these books The characters are fun and well-developed The banter is good
Great story!
Review from The Second Betrayal →
Meat on this bone… Definitely going to listen again! This is good enough to go back and fill in a few blanks…
The book is good overall, I just bought the second. However, it feels like it’s missing something, I’m not quite sure what though, perhaps not enough descriptive language I honestly couldn’t tell you what anything looks like, even the main character.