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Amazing

Review from Wintersteel →

The flow of the book was easy and hard to not listen straight through. Already can’t wait for the next book in the series

felt forcefully extended

Review from Ghosts of the Erlyn →

I hate when writers force intrigue thinking its clever but its just an annoying exclusion to keep a story going. “oooo this thing happened that we won’t tell you about because I need you to keep reading” you keep people with good writing that can progress naturally and believability…not with forced random occurrences the defy..

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Ambivalent

Review from Shadeslinger →

Starts off weak, gets a bit better as it progresses. The gamification aspects of the story were a bit too strong for my tastes, with talk of enemy pathing and the like.