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the story is too long with little action/engagement in couple of chapters, and can be condensed to keep the reader engaged ..

the only thing this book lacked in my opinion is more shuffles. great series though

The story, and almost everything was perfect. except. I had trouble wrapping head around “I bit the inside of my cheek”, and “I licked my lips”.They’re used so often. it was hard for me to imagine how those weren’t painful, or just plain weird. other than that. It’s an amazing story.

some spoilers aheadI got what I came to this book for. Let’s face it, anyone who listened to this listened to it for the same reason people watch a lot of Isekai anime. they was to see stupid overpowered character A wreck slightly less OP character B. bonus points if character B is arrogant.that’s what..

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I like the idea of the story and I’m intrigued to see where it goes Buddy Johnson around way too much and sometimes hard to follow.

for a MC who spent the last 3 years reading books and knowing all he allows for the dumbest most obvious betrayals to happen and his class is a Worker class NOT MAGE NOT WARRIOR NOT CLERIC NOT ARHER but boring worker class and believe me its a boring class just in case you don’t..

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Lair creates some amazing moments and, NIC’s adopted personalities are a real treat, but it also suffers from a large number of well-known writing pitfalls that would have been easily avoided with even a small amount of study or a few beta readers who are writers giving feedback. The most common problem is that the..

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he’s mostly naïve, not dumb. a lot of people use this as a synonym, but it absolutely isn’t. he trusted when he shouldn’t have. I really can’t stand stupidity or naïveté in male characters and ‘coming of age’ is a trope or mini genre that needs to die a painful death. but it isnt so..

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I don’t why people are so hard on this book, it felt much stronger than the fifth and was great to listen to. I think a lot of people are forgetting where the fifth book ended because there was definitely a lot more story progression in here than other reviews are giving credit for. And..

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This book has a good story with great mechanics thought out well and explained well. The book goes into a lots of detail at times, but I always found it quite enjoyable. Gamers will appreciate this book. The main character scales well and is not OP, which is really nice. Would recommend!