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Great continuation

Review from Convergence →

Once again the story rolls on in a well written way. The only things that bother me from time to time is the lack of information about some parts. I do appreciate the time skipping and not being bogged down. But to the same point sometimes a little more information would go a long way…

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MC Evolves Too Quickly

Review from A Snake’s Life →

It was a novel idea…poorly executed. I didn’t struggle to finish this one, it wasn’t long enough for that, but I did struggle to really care. A classic case of character too powerful, too fast, with no real struggles… Domination without much struggle is a ‘who cares…meh’ situation. And with that, I just can’t be..

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Couldn’t finish

Review from Chrysalis (A Fantasy LitRPG) →

Sadly, I couldn’t finish this. It had a strong start and the author has talent; however the main characters are university students that have the reasoning skills of grade schoolers with the emotional intelligence to match. If the author would have just taken out the needless cursing, which thickens in the middle, and the gag..

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