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Scratched the itch

Review from The Aspects →

The Zack parts are much better than previous books where Zack was a completely unlikable character. After the personality reset via deus ex machina, where he went from annoying to overpowered and slightly annoying. I still am hoping he dies off, but his parts don’t ruin the book like the previous books. Ryun is much..

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Junior High humor

Review from #CrimeTime →

I couldn’t finish this. Chase, the half brother was over the top ridiculous and annoying. I appreciate slapstick humor, but this sounded like it was written by a 7th grader. Don’t waste your credit.