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Heitch whining through the story was nearly intolerable.When he reading through, he’s fine, but the emotional outbursts are cringe.

A great space story book two I will listen to book three and enjoy the complete story

I dont need to be reminded 20 times whats currently happening in a 10-minute period the repetition is simply terrible. made it into chapter seven and had to stop due to irritation and annoyance.

Presentation could have been better either way a professional. My biggest complaint was that he minimized the lessons learned from Tilikum who lived in captivity for 34 years and sired many babies for Seaworld.

Absolutely one of the best books that has been written by Joshua Dalzelle! I cannot wait to see where it leads from here.

The author lays out a very compelling case against Stanley Lord, but the problem is that he just doesn’t stop. His well laid-out argument devolves into a rant, and eventually a screed. By the end, he goes full armchair psychologist, pathologizing Lord’s actions and sticking him with a diagnosis. The author also likes to put..

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Nothing is fundamentally wrong with this book; just that everything (i.e. suspense, character development, dialogue, pacing, etc.) could be better. It’s kind of difficult to explain why this wasn’t compelling.

Way too much military and too little science. Whole book could have just been military fiction transpiring on Earth. Get more science. Less of the army stuff.

love this book series you can’t wait to read the next book series by this author keep up the great work