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Hit and miss

Review from Renegade →

I really don’t get the reviews saying this was suspenseful or plot twisting. Two characters’ involvement was obviously from the start. In my opinion the reviews stating that the main character was immature and whinny had more to do with the narrator’s voice choice and tone. The voice of the brother was not consistent either…

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Predictable

Review from Don’t Look Now →

Story line was drawn out and predictable. Slow forming, the biggest/best surprise was the twist on her vision. Probably going to move on from this author and look for others.

If only

Review from Curvy Girls Can’t Date Quarterbacks →

If only this story was created during my high school years I would have loved myself back then. I wasn’t true to myself. I had crushes but always thought I wasn’t beautiful or cute because of my size. No handsome guy would like me. I changed my true self to being one of the guys…

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