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Extremely Cringy

Review from Half Share →

Final quarter of the book is a cringe-fest of “romance”, poor writing, and likely some strange projection of the author’s fetishes. Why is this so common for sci-fi writers? it’s like they can’t help themselves.

Good! Give it a listen.

Review from Flux →

Story really picks up as it goes along and what’s great is how it ties into the overarching universe that Jeremy has created! Took me a min to switch to this new narrator but he’s not bad.

WTF- glorifying cheating?! interchangeable babies

Review from Torin →

This is the worst book I have listened to by this author. I thought she would show some class, but apparently she thinks it’s just awesome to have a cheater get a happily ever after with his stripper. He even moved his illegitimate baby into his dead babies nursery! You totally glorified an unworthy cheater!..

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Could not finish

Review from Star Fire →

The main character has way way too much internal dialogue. Plus, the actions really don’t make sense even while having a willing suspension of disbelief.

How is this rated so high?

Review from Half Share →

This story has absolutely NO plot. He buys new clothes and suddenly everyone is in love with him? why? So much of what is said or happens is repetitive. And, honestly, it’s written as if this 18 year old with no life experience can do no wrong. I’m glad it was included with my subscription..

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