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No plot

Review from Quarter Share →

I’m convinced that the book is actually a mystery thriller. It should have been titled: The Case Of The Missing Plot. Like where did it go? And who took it?Is the author saving it for book two? If mercantile minutiae in space is your thing then look no further.

Too much dialogue, Not enough passion!

Review from Her Rough Ride →

While this book was well written, I found myself skipping chapters which I never do unless a novel is dragging on. It could of been half the size! I enjoy a slow buildup in order to truly connect with the characters. However, this was way too wordy. Descent delivery but boring back story.

Not my favorite

Review from Flux →

Certain aspects are too crazy to accept. I did enjoy listening to most of it, but couldn’t help rolling my eyes at the level of insanity. If it weren’t for the whole universe and wanting to see it come together, I would have been really disappointed. I also just don’t like this narrator. Too nasally..

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Just OK

Review from Heart of Stone: The Stone Series, Volume 1 →

The female narrator has strange inflections when reading making it difficult to listen to. The story is a copy cat of 50 Shades of Grey and it is so close to the story line it was boring at times. There was a slight change up but no urge to move on in the series.

SO VERY FUNNY

Review from Space Force →

I am still chuckling as I write, trying to hold back another belly laugh as I went my pants. This novel, the actors, the originality… everything culminated into sheer delight! Please quickly write the next book and make this a series. Also, this needs to go straight to screenplay! This will be a DELIGHTFUL movie!..

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Interesting concept with a few good parts

Review from Tether →

The concept was somewhat interesting, but most of the story felt kind of repetitive and boring. It did not really capture my attention. I guess I would have preferred less focus on the destruction and more focus on the “science” and experimentation that was being done. I did not really like the narrator either. Most..

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