The last book’s sorry was weak, but I figured it was just getting started. This book was weaker. The main character seemingly struggles with nothing. He’s 18. Everything he studies is so easy that the only time it seems hard is when it’s “accidentally” two tiers harder than what he thought it was. Every business..
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Work on the voices more
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Obviously we’ll written. The story moves along and keeps your attention. It’s just that the main character keeps playing the tragic victim. We’ll he doesn’t really dive into it but he’s a young, handsome, confident, educated, highly intelligent and motivated guy. But at every turn there’s whiny self doubt trash. But then he just goes..
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Unfinished Series
Review from Rise of a D-List Supervillain →
simple perfect pulp
Review from Cthulhu Armageddon →
This was a wonderful book.
Review from Hard Wired →
This was a wonderful book about a true American. The narrator was fantastic the book was fantastic and I couldn’t stop listening until the book was completely finished. It made me proud to be an American. This man fought to the very end and was successful. I would recommend this book to anyone I knew…
great series so far
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