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Reads like a First Draft

Review from Space Force →

title says it all. this needed at least two more red lines before publishing. descriptive imagery is especially lacking, as all the sudden we’ll have a giant hole or void in the scene but it exists without any spacial relationship to the characters. the two narrators work once we’re 1/3 of the way in, but..

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Just enough of everything, but not too much.

Review from Apocalypse Machine →

Fun book to listen to. While it focuses on a general storyline their are plenty of interesting and entertaining spinoffs that allow for fantastic perspective of the entire event. Think the original “World War Z”. It’s definitely going to get another play as I’m sure I missed some good stuff.