Whole chapters could be cut, the book is way too long. The many genius bits are drowned in words.
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Love the action, when you want to turn off your mind and just disappear in war. This is your book, every your either in a hot battle or leading up to on. Like the Mercedes logo Air, Land and Sea you get war in each. This is not a tight well organized plot. It’s just..
Worth reading for sure! Good book
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The narration didn’t bother me as it did some readers. For me, it was just too dull. After the first couple of chapters, the content, which could be interesting, is presented in such a dry, dull way, I found myself spacing off or wanting to fast forward. Fast forwarding through “the boring parts” would be..
The story feels new though maybe it’s because of the narrator gaps happen. It could be me, the action scenes are monotone. So while your mind raced as well as your heart. The story is given to you as if someone was telling you the weather as you stand outside. I have books 4-6 which..
What is up with Charlie? He was a soldier but when his friends are captured he gives away all advantages by revealing his self, trash talking and not shooting. When he is captured and after his shipmates are killed by the slavers, he still talks to his captors in this stupidly open way. And he..