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Not scary

Review from The House →

I didn’t find the story scary or creepy. It is disgusting and gross which I think is more Bentley Littles style. I think there were too many characters and not enough cohesiveness to bring everything together. The narrator gave a good performance and did the best he could to give each character a distinctive voice.

meh

Review from Timeless →

When the first line out of a characters mouth is a lie, then a huge chunk of time is dedicated to trying to prove they can’t lie, somebody wasn’t paying attention. Too much time trying to fit in political messaging at the beginning and not enough time working on making a good story.