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The plot thickens

Review from Awaken Online: Dominion →

A new threat has come to the Twilight Throne and there is little Jason and the crew can do to stop it. Now Jason is supposed to conquer the area around the city while defending the city itself. Oh, and Jason has to deal with IRL issues, like managing a rocky relationship with a friend..

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MC lacks passion

Review from Awaken Online: Ember →

Bagwell and Stifel produce another amazing addition to the AO world. The main character, however, seems more reserved than other supporting characters in the story line and leaves me questioning if Finn is the best choice as the embodiment of passion. I’ll need more from Finn in order for me to believe this side story.

Average storyline with poor dialog.

Review from The Lost Starship →

I really wanted to like this. I liked the main storyline, and the character concepts are acceptable, but it’s hard to get by the flaws. The diaiog at points is almost painful. I can live with the overly formal semantics, but the backstory to explain this type of dialog in the military is never established…

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