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Painfully juvenile

Review from Awaken Online: Catharsis →

The story seems written by a middle schooler with the expected angst and frustration of the age. Everything is predictable and over the top, especially his unprecedented rate of advancement and power gains (even if provided by a god). Even the narrator sounds comically fitting of the “depth” of the storyline. I’m astounded this is..

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Bentley hates people…

Review from The Store →

The Store is about the stupidest people on Earth, especially females (like the other 2 stories that I read). I think he hates or doesn’t know any smart and strong women.

Narrator is barely listenable

Review from Awaken Online: Precipice →

I like the story so far alright… I highly disagree with the POV the writer has taken about midway through this second book that “Good and Evil are points of view, Anikin.” Acts are neutral, intentions are not. Killing is not always wrong, murder for spite is. But the character is midway through his journey..

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