The story was badly written, but the Narrator was not very good at his craft either.His Scottish accent was especially bad.At one point I realised the narrator recognised the story was not going very well, when he said “chapter 21” or something, as if he were hoping the book would be over really soon.
An age old conundrum. A poor narrator versus a poor plot. Hard to tell which is worse.
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