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Review from The Wastes of Keldora →

The whole time the MC was weak willed and had no self-esteem. Was pushed around by bossy mean trope of a female character who verbally abused him the whole book even when he did nothing wrong. Had potential but alas it was wasted.

Fun time.

Review from The Wastes of Keldora →

The story is decent. The narrator is okay. However it desperately needs a sound engineer. On multiple occasions the sound will rise or drop and massive tone shifts. This doesn’t make the experience horrible but jaring at times.

Dueling betas?

Review from The Wastes of Keldora →

Love the story concept, but was taken aback by ultra cringey exchanges between MC and other characters who have very misplaced submissive/beta exchanges with one another. It wouldn’t be so noteworthy, but it happens in almost every chapter.

Chiaroscuro

Review from Chiaroscuro: The Mouse and the Candle →

This was very good but, very long.There was a lot of repetition with what the Priest was thinking.To sum up the story,How does a priest keep a vampire a’alive’ through the ages?’ Christopher James Mayer was a wonderful narrator.I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.’ 

New beginnings. Same people.

Review from The Wastes of Keldora →

I have only gotten to ch 13, and the main female character is the worst. She summons the MC, threatens him, blame him for things that clearly weren’t his fault (always in hindsight), and he took an arrow to save someone life. If the MC doesn’t stand up for himself by the end of this..

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Did it again! Great Read!

Review from Restoration →

Nelson gives such a fresh take on the litrpg genre. Where most take the “sucked into a world as real as ours and can’t escape” route, Nelson takes us on a traditional MMORPG journey filled with nostalgia and laughs. Interesting plot- great fun! Highly recommend!