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Stupid MC, bad writing.

Review from Way of the Wolf →

The MC has more plot armor then luffy and Naruto combined. The author seems to be very young or just unimaginative. The profile updates take over 2 minutes at 1.2 speed. Not to mention you have to listen at 1.2 speed to even make it through the book. It makes no sense how the MC..

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I didn’t finish it

Review from Empty Bodies →

Ok, I admit that I was born before 2000 so grammar is important to me. I suppose I shouldn’t expect much originality from the author when the subject is “zombies”. On the other hand, I do expect the him or her to make use of an editor! There were plenty of malapropisms and awkward use..

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Very unique honestly super interesting world and characters

Review from The Sword of Kaigen: A Theonite War Story →

I thought overall the story was incredible the first quarter I’d say was probably the hardest to get through but once I could empathise with the characters the more pain I felt …. It was beautiful, painful and extremely introspective I would recommend to basically anyone who likes more interpersonal storytelling but I will also..

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Another Story with a Disappointing MC

Review from The Grand Game, Book 1 →

The premise and synopsis sounded interesting, so I gave this book a good shake. It is unfortunately the case that this book has very simplistic “crayon” writing. It is rife with filler sentences often going over information just covered, and trite events that add nothing to the progress of the character or story. I was..

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