I really struggled with this story during the entire wind battle section. Magic systems just sort of showed up (when was I supposed to have known about the blood bending ability? It caught me by surprise). I found it, frankly, boring because I had yet to be connected with any of the main characters. I..
Review from This Quest Is Broken! →
Maybe this is a funny story, but I can’t tell because the narrator has ONE VOICE and only that one voice. EVERYTHING is said in that one voice. I can’t tell who is talking. Everyone sounds exactly the same. It’s not funny because I never know who is talking.
the narrator’s imitation of African American voices was awful, offensive & unnecessary. He didnt change voices like that 4 any of the other characters. we don’t speak in that staccato manner.
I went into this expecting slice-of-life litrpg, with a strong emphasis on comedy/silliness. I mean, the premise of this whole book is “a quest to find a load of bread.” I got everything I expected… and some. The book started out GREAT. I’m talking, really good. It was burning quickly, but not super quick. The..
incredible story. Characters developed in such a beautiful way. so much growth and personal development from every character.
Review from The Grand Game, Book 1 →
I almost dropped the book because the beginning was such a slow start. I am so glad I didn’t and I now understand why it’s at the top of so many peoples recommendations list. It’s unique and the man character is a perfect blend of relatable and reckless to keep you interested.
Not what I expected when I started the story but I’m not mad. Great character development and narrator was great at portraying the characters
I was utterly wrecked by this story. It was beautifully written. I want more stories set in this world
Review from EMP: Return of the Wild West: The Complete Series →
Not recommended. This is the first I’ve read from this author. I’ll sample another, but very disappointed.
This book feels like it is for a target audience that isn’t me. The character development felt linear and bland. The characters feel bland until a point where they jump to tons of character and emotional development but it feels rushed and disingenuous. The writing for the fight scenes are brilliant. The beginning is bland..