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The story itself could be very good but the dialogue and characters suck. The person reading sucks feel likes I’m listening to someone who has never actually had a conversation with another person.

I wanted to like this but the main female was so whiny.i think the author read a pepper handbook and thought they could write a pepper book

This should be under the romance category as the entire eight books were all sappy and Brooke just always went on and on about her feelings all the time and then it went on and on about the same feelings again from John’s point of view- which was the exact same as Brooks so we..

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Fantastic story, but the narrator mispronouncing basic Japanese words was jarring. Some examples were pronouncing to-sama as too-sama, also ne- and ni- the same made it confusing to know if they were talking about sisters or brothers. The narrator also had a strange tone, often sounding aloof or quizzical when reading

Sounded like a book written by a high school student The story line and the narration was more in line with YA BOOKS

Overall is extremely boring writing, the narrator has such low energy and lack of emotions that I feel myself being drained listening to him. The story is 1 dimensional and so slow and boring it feels like a robot generated the story. Extremely old and exhausted premise of teleported into a death dungeon. Character is..

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The story was great, but the narrator mispronounced most of the Japanese words which made it harder to be fully immersed in the story.

All the constant snarkiness, mismatched love triangles, and white knighting made me feel like I was reading a harem fantasy. The dialogue is extremely basic. The sound was crisp and easy to understand, but there was not much difference between the character voices. Was constantly getting confused as to who was talking to who.

This reads like the outline of a zombie book and not a full story. No character development. Barely any plot. Incredibly boring

too much live story bs …and the narrator keeps making the lead character sound like Mr Garrison on Southpark. Not enough Zombies or gore. sorry not for me.