Lack of characterization. Jumps straight into the action without any real buildup. And a so-called special agent who is just a damsel in distress.
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I gave up
Review from Summoner Assassin →
Sorry, but I could not finish this one. I tried several times but it was just not for me. Way to modernistic type of story. I like and love things like Jack Reacher stories but this just left me cold. Others may find it perfect but it was not for me.
Not great
Review from Last Light – The Complete Series →
Not great, slow after 5 hours slow slow slow. It’s fill words of a story. I can’t say it enough. Slow slow slow
Like many people who have left reviews, I about gave up around halfway. I was just bored and couldn’t figure out who to emotionally invest in. it did start to get better, but then just… ended. I’m so thoroughly disappointed in this book. And the performance didn’t help at all. it’s like he didn’t even..
Loved the idea, the story line, characters, etc. Struggled with repetition of describing the slicks… yeah, we get it. We’re readers who enjoy good stories, not idiots! Allow our minds to fill in the rest. Sheesh! The worst part was the narrator. I thought I was hanging out with a stoner, surfer from the west..
First of all the narration was over the top on drama. The story was poorly written and with the overly dramatic narrator, I could only make it it through a hour or two before I just had it!.The only reason the book was 40 hrs. plus is because it was written over and over in..
Mc is an idiot
Review from Wolf in the Void →
Just about every situation could have been avoided if he wasn’t so full of himself and actually thought about anything but about how good he is at everything
The narrator has the same weird inflections for all the different feelings a person has and after 6hrs I couldn’t listen to him anymore. The author writes from a perspective of someone who doesn’t know much of anything on how fighting, the way people would react and their true to character look, and how living..
Stupid
Review from The Grand Game, Book 1 →
my god the mc is dumb, lacks common sense and is too trusting.. when the bird doesn’t tell him something he finds out later he was surprised, even if the master is shady as fuu
The narrator mispronounced words such as “Boogeyman”. He kept calling Fox the “Bogeyman”. This was one of the very annoying mispronounced words. Overall I did like the plot but it got a bit predictable especially with the “few” supplies at the cabin when it was said they had enough until spring. I don’t regret listening..