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Review from This Quest Is Broken! →

All the constant snarkiness, mismatched love triangles, and white knighting made me feel like I was reading a harem fantasy. The dialogue is extremely basic. The sound was crisp and easy to understand, but there was not much difference between the character voices. Was constantly getting confused as to who was talking to who.

Erratic protagonist

Review from Nightblade →

The story did not paint a good picture in my head since the author didn’t describe much. He’ll say “she’s beautiful” and then doesn’t include any details about her whatsoever. And the action scenes were the same, no details. And the protagonist, Ryo, is an emotionally erratic sociopath. One minute he’ll be grieving the pain..

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