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I didn’t enjoy

Review from Nightblade →

I struggled with most parts of this book and narration. bottom line I thought the pacing of the plot points just wasn’t believable. I also thought the voices of the narration were horrible. Sorry I will not be continuing the story.

hate it

Review from Nightblade →

I hate the narrator voices for the characters I hate the way the author keeps repeating the characters name every other word. it seems like a kid wrote this and the editor never edited. only reason why it has Stars is because it would not let me save without marking one.

Robotic narration

Review from Nightblade →

It’s hard to judge the story, because I couldn’t get past the robotic narration. As the book would progress, I found that the dead pan narration just left me with a hollow experience.

Glad when it was over

Review from Girl Jacked →

Any additional comments? The story was sophomoric & too plodding to hold interest. The protagonist was likeable but was also a sloppy police detective. He seemed unprepared the majority of the time i.e. not bringing a gun etc. It may have had something to do with the narrator but listening to character Replacement’s immature &..

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Interesting world, but feels like a rough draft.

Review from Nightblade →

The story is decent and the world is interesting, but the writing style is very choppy. The events in this book feel lightly mentioned, with a lot of potential detail just skimmed over. It almost seems to be a summary of events rather then a telling. Very little character dialog, and thus development, which makes..

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