I really struggled through this book. Poor Word usage. Poor character development. Narrator was ok.
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Definitely a struggle to finish. I only did so because I paid for it. By the end of the book I wished every one of the characters had died because any people as stupid as they were deserved not to make it.Conversations and character rections were overdone and overdramatized.
After 10 chapters I had no idea what was going on, and I hadn’t met a character I cared to learn the fate of. Maybe it improves? I doubt I’ll find out. The only character that really sticks with after 10 chapters is a delusional and terrible “writer” whose behaviour is just over the top…
A dark mystery
Review from The Watson Girl →
Would not recommend for the sensitive. Visually disturbing. I cannot finish reading this dark and negative book. Sorry I purchased it.
The narrator, Andrew Tell is what ruins this book. Though the religious rhetoric is frustrating. Any real life religious persons need mental help for being subjected to long term mental conditioning, brainwashing, and higher tendencies toward committing religious violence.
Wow…. Terrible
Review from Jurassic Dead Box Set →
I don’t write reviews. I don’t not finish books. I finished this one out of pure will power. It was terrible. Narrator was terrible, story was terrible, all of it was terrible.
insert bad rap hereppp]⁰
Review from Trojan Colony →
insert bad rant here good concepts but he kept them to himself I mean the drones
Almost amazing.
Review from Trojan Colony →
If it weren’t for the narrator consistently mispronouncing a certain character’s name (In the second book!) I’d have rated this higher.
How is this rated so high?
Review from Edge of Eons →
The narrator pauses in odd spots and constantly uses terrible inflection. The writing is redundant. I kept imaging this book being written and read to me by a 7th grade teacher. It was a cool premise for a story but poorly written and read. I probably won’t listen to the second one.
I tried, honestly I did. But this is the worst book and series. I listened to the entire first book and part of the second. There is no way a former Army Ranger would possibly talk, think or act the way portrayed. The story line ambles along like there was no prior planning and just..