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Last Grace Hamilton I’ll buy. Sophomoric dialogue, thin characters and disconnected plot twists. Hence the title of this review

it is such a shame. This story had/has such potential. Character development is almost nonexistent. Where was the editor during all of this?I think this would make a better animation 🤔 like anime.

Amazon should rate these books especially since they cost adult prices. The storyline sounded interesting. But the execution was puerile, cliched, and uninteresting. As I read the first book, I could feel my IQ dropping. I was disappointed & will not be finishing the series. I stopped reading the first book.

Guns referred to by Make model and caliber just short of the serial numbersadding water to radiator fixes car no start condition. characters are disarmed and beaten in every other chapter. characters hardly eat. understand 5 books for 1 credit

the most inept main characters I have ever read.if there’s any possible way to screw up, they find it.

descent story but each book does not have a logical end. Narrator reads like he is telling a story to children. His style does not fit this type of story.

I was quite enjoying the first few hours of the book, author does a good job of taking normal RPG/Fantasy mechanics and turning them on their head to be just ridiculous enough to be funny, but without becoming completely obnoxious. There are some good comedic moments as we learn about our main cast and the..

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long boring no plot too much useless conversation. bad characters no need for code names

I lose pretty much all respect for a narrator that mispronounces words… couple that with a mediocre poor technical data story and you get what you get.

I couldn’t get past chapter 3. It’s like being forced to sit thru someone’s vacation photos while they narrate every boring detail. Not to mention the narrator couldn’t even muster up a decent southern drawl. Save yourself!!!