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Great story but the Japanese is awful!

Review from The Sword of Kaigen: A Theonite War Story →

The story and characters are captivating and interesting. I just wish the author would have spent ten minutes researching Japanese family names, titles, and honorifics! You rarely find the title “father” without the honorific prefix O (great)…meaning it should be written Otou-San, not tousan (especially someone as important as a Matsuda) and no one except..

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Goodbye

Review from Wolf in the Void →

I should have dropped this after the first one but there were a few threads I found interesting. He runs and hides from ever opponent or he mind rapes someone into fighting for him or he straight manipulate two of his enemies into fighting each other the end. literally those scenarios just repeat over and..

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Frustrating

Review from Last Light – The Complete Series →

The story bounces from one set of characters to another without pause, causing slight confusion. Over the top descriptions of just about everything….constantly. Characters making choices that make no sense. Characters having thoughts that make no sense. Oh and Ottawa is the capital city of Canada….so the constant talk of the drilling incident in Ottawa….makes..

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