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Poor writing

Review from The Fortifier →

MC is supposed to be in his 50s but acts like an edgy toddler with anger issues. Litrpg and base building elements are extremely light. Considering what the name of the book is, I thought we would get more building and detail on what he is doing but you get “he made a courtyard or..

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Not Funny

Review from This Quest Is Broken! →

All the characters are men. Some are called women, but every character speaks and acts like a man. You could gender swap all the main characters, and it wouldn’t change the book. There is no real emotion, even when it seems as if characters are dead. The author jams in puns and makes sure everyone..

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