I love the series, and I am going to continue the series as long as it keeps coming with the heat. So I enjoyed a lot of this book yet it was lacking in some areas. I am not going to go deep, but I think the author has to make up for that ending. hahaha. The next book better be so very impressive bc the ending is out of there. Look I know you are trying to do something with Zack and maybe the next book will give us a different look at him, but nobody really likes Zack. I tried, but dude is frustrating.
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this power up you gave Zack seems like you put him on par with High Rankers. Like he literally got super powerful in like 20 mins. HAHAHA. it doesn’t seem great. Maybe it is because we don’t like him.
Ryun is the guy everybody wants to read about most of the time. what about AirClaw? did you leave Ryun out of the epilogue so you can put them two back together in the next book or what? Ryun didn’t seem like he did anything spectacular in this book so fix that in the next book.
I think you got all the other characters right though. I am done complaining for now and can’t wait for the next book.
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