I hate this stupid fairy. I haven’t found myself cursing any character in almost any book as much as I did the fairy.
The author has clearly read better other better dungeon core books. The problem is too much happens too fast for book 1. Oh there is a problem but that’s going to kill a character! Never mind the dungeon is just amazing or that piece of crap fairy gives just the right advice.
I never believed the dungeon was ever in danger. Any thing the dungeon succeeds almost immediately. He is told don’t do this or that and yet he does and suffers no consequences. Nothing he does ever comes back to bite him.
The fairy is just so annoying. I never believed the romances human or other wise. People just immediately love each other. No chase no dilemmas just love at first sight. The fairy has a terrible voice that just hurts to listen. The actress is great and other books but this constantly cutesy voice for hours makes a chalkboard scratching sound like the voice of god in comparison.
The story is weak and lacks any actual threat. The emotions are none existent if you don’t count boredom, anger, and rage. The author needed someone to sit him down and tell him to take a second draft because this first draft trash doesn’t cut it. The editor should be ashamed they didn’t even suggest a change. If they did suggest changes and we still got this pile of soggy milk toast writing both editor and author need to reconsider their life choices.