Ok so I’ve thought long and hard about this series and I am still baffled and see no definitive path forward with this. Ryun is supposed to be the MC and yet we are constantly dealing with Zach, Zach’s feelings, Zach’s GF, Zach’s hypocrisy, more Zach, even more Zach and his never ending list of BS!! I keep losing focus with this because I have no damn idea whose journey I am supposed to be ultimately concentrating on. And why in the name of all that is holy did Zach become so powerful and ridiculously OP. WTAF!!!! Mr. Author (IK), dude, you are losing me with all of this and you are starting to trigger unsavory thoughts in me about you writing/writing style. Please fix this mess of issues you created.