Spoilers. The story has an interesting premise, but there are too many weird situations. The MC’s changes are too quick and ring hollow, he goes from wanting to be able to log out to accepting the situation as his new life too quickly. The progression on decisions he makes is random, for example falling in love with an npc. It isnt written well either. Jeff Hays did the best he could be sometimes he lacks the emotion required to elevate the source material. Average.