Well to start… This would be 5 stars out the gate but a stat or character sheet that lasts more than 5+ min. then another that last 12+ min. (within the first few chapters) is just flat out ridiculous
– Love the story tho… more to come
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Ok… I really do love the expansive yet fully contained story telling. We are staying focused on the main thing (The Twilight Melody Sect) while also deftly expanding the point of view to other characters that only add to the overall story.
Still no clutter, still no extra fat on this story. Wonderful!
It appears the majority of these character sheets will be minuets upon minuets long (still ridiculous) but they are being used more sparingly the further the story goes.
Story is up to 5 stars but overall still sitting at 4 stars until further notice
– More to come
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