Unnecessary sound effects.

Ugh. Stop with the awful sound effects. They are distracting from the storytelling, not enhancing it. The screeching and whining of the sounds caused me to wince and cringe. They were so bad.

The story itself wasn’t bad. On par for most of the stories of this genre. There was quite a bit of monologue which would have been fine except for the annoying echo effect that accompanied most of it.