Unbelievable cheese. A less then average erotica.

The ‘romance’ in this is just clearly physical based only as these characters barely know eachother, as a reader you don’t even know much about these characters other then surface level, and they are already falling head over heels for eachother which initially comes off as just a convenience.

I also really didn’t like how this ‘closeted religious and ashamed bisexual’ story line played out.

This main character is supposedly been hiding his attraction to men for decades, coincidentally has a attractive and helpless man fall into his lap to care for and overnight he’s throat deep and swallowing man juice like a champ.

Haha!

It reminds me of a cheesy adult Erotic film set up.

There just is NO build up. This completly kills the fantasy for me and really just makes this to come off as the most typical of typical adult Erotic stories. I just never truly felt the tension at any point or felt a honest connection. It felt so surface level and bases on physical attraction, which is FINE, but the story trys to sell it like this is romantic and the characters themselves even have romantic dialog about how meaningful this all was to them after just one spur of the moment throat guzzle.

Its definitely spicy and the scenes are well written but there’s so many books that do the same thing but can build up a better plot to surround those spicy scenes, which sorta puts this book in a position of just not being enough to compete with what other authors can do better.

I really just didn’t like this plot and the character building felt lazy and mostly focused on trying to get an Erotic scene out primarily over getting to know any character. The romance felt unbelievable, uncomfortably convenient and surface level.

It could definitely have used a lot more build up if this book was trying to be anything other then a serviceable erotica.

The voice actor Joel Leslie was fantastic! I wish they just used him because this other guy was awful and did not know at all how to make some of these scenes work. It was uncomfortable whenever Joel’s narration ended.