First off, I love the narrators. It was the main reason I got the series. But the main conflict of the story was saying “I have to talk to him” and never doing it. I got confused with all the angst, the MC knew they liked each in the first 30 minutes, but all the internal monologue to keep themselves apart seemed unnecessary. There was a lot of repetition throughout the writing also. The first book in the series was good, but the second and third needed work.