Antics versus idiocy. No one would hang around Donut if she was this insufferable and made decisions that would result in getting her friends killed. I get it’s a mix of the character’s personality, her defense mechanism, and she’s a cat, but you’ve shown she can grow…so please tone it down in the next book. Ex: Being patronizing and pointing out Carl’s mistakes when her decisions almost get them killed over and over. It’s been done, grow the character please. PS: the deck card level was such a fun and unique idea, well done.
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