This is a great story. I’m a huge fan of lots of the authors other works, but this one just repeated things too much. It was kinda hard to get through the first half of the book, due to the cliches, and overall predictability of it. The second half was much better and I’m interested in the second book, I just hope that they don’t use as much representation. At some points it seemed like a high-school trying to fill a word count in an essay. Performance was nice. very well done there.