So while I enjoyed the concept of the story and the overall story layout as well the characters the huge turn off for this book is the constant repetitiveness of similar phrases or the absolute horrendously repetitive read out of stats. If it was even cut down just a little bit it would have been completely day and night difference unfortunately in this book the stats just felt like filler and away to raise the word count they just really did not seem to have much point other then that. All that being said the story within itself was good and the narrator did a really good job. So i will probably be checking out the second book.