I like this one a little bit better than the average. I thought the story idea and Concepts were very good it was a little bit too detailed in the gaming world and two true to the gaming platform but at the same time the story was fairly well developed. There was however not a lot of story arc or character Arc in my opinion. The story went on as expected the person is locked in the artificial world they are forced to play along with it and they are forced to deal with all kinds of issues and will come. However the interface between the real world and the game world was weird. As if the lawyers themselves and the gaming company couldn’t assist to help keep their character alive and the perils limited. Also the lawyers and their contracts were stupid. There’s no way that any intelligent lawyer would believe that any contract written under duress would be considered valid in a court of law and then continue to do more things that are equally on Shady knowing that it would come out. All in all it was better than most of the this style that I’ve read but it’s nowhere near as good as they cartoon series or the anime Sword Art Online from which the seems to be based