slight spoilers ahead: I liked the story, it’s different. I feel like this story doesn’t lend itself to the narrator very well. I like his other reads, just not really into this one.
My main complaint isn’t really with the story itself, but with the cover art. If the “o” in “of” on the cover is supposed to be the mentioned tattoo in the story, then someone needs to learn geometry. A pentagram has 5 points, not 6 like the picture on the cover.