Okay, so this has a really good premise to it. I like how it starts off as similar to other LitRPG virtual reality books, but puts a different twist on it. This is a story that the MC has a much more invested interest in the world he finds himself in. There were times that the MC was a bit whiny and did seem to switch how he felt about his circumstances rather quickly and almost nonchalantly. Of course this can be argued that it was solely character growth, which I do see. The world development was pretty good and the other characters were at times fantastic and well done.

Overall I did like the book, but I do agree with others that said the book was a bit short. It could have been fleshed out more or other situations described/added to it. I feel that since this was released before, it was during the time when newly emerging authors tended to write shorter stories. I do look forward to the remaining books in the series as I want to see what takes place.

As far as the narration goes, absolutely fantastic! I really enjoyed Travis’ take on the different characters and I felt he did a great job, especially with Bernard! A great, though regrettably, short story.