I went into this book thinking it would be like the Divine Dungeon series, a much better serious in my mind, its better written, it goes at a good pace and most of all, it doesnt play out like an erotica novel.
I stopped after 5 hours of listening to this, I couldnt take it any longer than that, the amount of time the author spends
explaining girls breasts is waaay too much, I mean, I must have skipped over 30 minutes worth of cringy overly explained
passages about breasts and nipples.
Hell, the very first time I had to skip story was when the author went in and explained in detail how some woman was
rubbing one out in the middle of a dungeon, thinking about how she wants to be taken by animals/trolls/monsters etc.
I really tried moving past it, skipping entire sections to get past the random and worthless (in context to the story) sex scenes, however the rest of the story really isnt that much better… If the author isnt explaining what a breast and nipple looks like and how the breast is bigger than the girls head, hes explaining what monsters are…
By the end of it, I really couldnt handle it anymore.. The entire books reeks of “I have a basic idea I want to write about, but I dont know what to write.. So I’ll pad the story with 80% filler by explaining everything down to the most minor details”.
In the end, the book puts me in mind of a Dungeons and Dragons Monster manual with a bunch of breast descriptions added in for horny teens.
Jeff Hays is largely the only positive thing about this book.. I have no idea how he managed to do voice work for this without cringing.