I was really disappointed with the number of blatant plot holes and “but wait theres more” cheap suspense moments (watch a Naruto or Dragon Ball Z episode for a cheap suspense refference). I can tell the author made changes to this story mid way without fully reviewing how they’d make plot holes. Overall it seems rushed an unpolished
Examples include: Jason never addressing Morgana cannibalizing the crippled kin, the gate piece conveniently materializing in some backwoods village?, pretty much every combat scene.
the narration is better but the narrator still struggles with foreign/import words. Example: “Miasma”.
To the author. please put in your regular effort next time.