Little world building, meandering plot, under-developed characters, and a self-inpressed author fixated with being crass for the sake of it. Apparently, this is a new storyline in an existing world, so a lot of the setting assumes you’ve read the other stories. I don’t know why the characters want to be heroes without imposing why I would want to be a hero on them. After they get their powers they don’t register themselves despite that being a central feature of their plight through the story. The author seems to break up chapters early so he can insert a meta/teasing title he thinks is funny and you will know how each of the women is dressed in every scene, but I can’t tell you what the male lead looks like other than having black hair. And by the end, no plotline is finished.