The males in this series are strange. Men aren’t allowed to have an opinion in Estes Park? It’s like reading the island of misfit males.

The series was light at the start, but now it’s weighed down with so much internal monologue that reading it feels like dragging your feet through a muddy swamp: heavy and exhausting.

Some of the lines are ridiculous too: “you promised my dog that you would never hurt his mother.” That’s a strange reaction by a 40 year old woman.

Fred’s reactions throughout are very strange and illogical and this story made her unlikable.