The writer has taken on too much, He doesn’t know whether he is writing a LITRPG novel, or a earth disaster.
The earth part of the novel is just too boring and dull, The LITRPG part of the novel is not well developed.
The main characters are just not believable.
The story is just to boring, The writing is good, but the subject matter is poor.
Eric.
The narration is good also but does not fit this novel.
The author is all over the place.